Matt Bellamy

This thread died and it makes me sad. I was thinking what a great mood I'm in and I remembered this thread and I was like WOAH so here I ...

Grammar errorz! "What are you doing check this anyways?" But hooray for more leaderboards!

Fahrvergnügen! :D

I think this is quite well-written. I like the way you rhymed seams and screams at the end; it made it seem very final. It's quite emotional without being over ...

Hey there! I like this and I think your rhyming in particular is very good. I think it would be easier to read though if it was split into stanzas, ...

Hey! I really like the tone to this, it's very emotional and well-written. Two nit-picks though, I think you don't need any commas at all in this line: "It was, ...

This is very bittersweet and emotional, and very well written. If I were your boyfriend I'd love to be given it! I'm sure he'll be able to relate to it, ...

I really like this, and I think the best bit is how it ended. I think comparing the innocence of virginity to pure white snow is a little bit cliché, ...

Hey! This is pretty descriptive, you used both description and emotion pretty well with this piece. However you say cracked lips a couple of times and I think you only ...

Hello! A light-hearted and fun poem, here. I'm unsure of the rhyming of need and fee though, and I have visions of a student doing their homework and scrubbing their ...

Hey! I like the simplicity of this poem. One thing I noticed was that it is all in past tense and then you say: "Your eyes are pools of light, ...

I thought this was pretty creative, and I enjoyed it, being the computer geek that I am! Though I'm not sure that using so much computery metaphor stuff makes the ...

At first I thought this was going to be about dancing. How wrong was I! I think that the repetition of boogie man made the poem sound very sinister. One ...

I am so going to sleep well tonight. We rock! :D

Hey! I thought this was pretty cute, especially the little boulder having its belly tickled by worms. The only thing that I didn't like it was all the dots... Because ...